Rainbow 04 – Critical Storytelling Failure
*sigh* So, I think everyone and their mother has criticized Rainbow at some point for acting a bit lax in the storytelling department. It looks like today is my turn to jump on the bandwagon. Episode 4 explores Sakuragi, his past, and his current motivation to protect the boys in his cell. Unfortunately, the way they present it, it falls flat on its face.
We get a flashback in the second half of the episode. Sakuragi’s father goes off to war. When the war ends, he doesn’t return. Eight years later, he finally shows up at the house, and it turns out the Russians had held him for the past eight years in a Siberian internment camp. The experience changed him completely. He’s become a drunkard, abusive, and lost his motivation for living. Sakuragi decides to stay out of the house more often to avoid him, but runs across his father in the pouring rain one night. They quarrel, and son essentially tells father to go to hell. The father actually complies, and the experience leaves Sakuragi emotionally scarred.
So, what’s the problem? Well, it generates no sympathy for Sakuragi’s father. His son correctly surmises he suffers from survivor’s guilt, but this is something we’re told matter-of-factly, rather than shown. Think about how much more impact this flashback could have had if we had even a glimpse into the father’s life.
Imagine the life of a middle-aged soldier having to fight in the Second World War while missing the family he holds dear. Imagine his reaction as his superiors hand him report after report of his children dying on the battlefield, likely without him ever having the chance to say goodbye. Imagine the despair he feels as the Russians corner him. Imagine the trip to Siberia, in an overloaded train car, as he realizes he may never see the wife and child he loves dearly ever again. Imagine him slowly breaking under the strain of the harsh and unforgiving environment in his “new home.” Imagine the disillusionment he feels when they finally release him eight years later.
Yet, we get none of this. Survivor’s guilt and its ilk can make for powerful storytelling, but you actually have to work with it correctly. You never feel immediate sympathy for a character who shows up on the doorstep in a psychologically defeated state. We need an emotional attachment to the character involved. This means we also have to experience the events that lead to the gradual breakdown. I know everything that happened, I just told you all of it, but Rainbow didn’t show it to me itself. All we see is the result: a man who has broken in several ways and then takes his own life. It presents us with fact instead of emotion. I feel no sympathy.
When Sakuragi says his motivation is to prevent such a tragedy from ever occurring again, I feel nothing as well. Yes, it is fact, and the conclusion derives from the premise, but that’s all it does. I don’t think it helps any when the whole fire scene is needlessly overwritten and dramatized. The amount of time they spend in the blaze, the Inspector beating up Uncovered, debris pinning Bro down, it’s all meant to pull at the heart-strings. They simply do too much with it though, thus it feels overdone. Perhaps I’m harsh in my assessment. However, presenting a dark drama doesn’t give you a free card from criticism. You also must have the writing to back it up. I’ve read a few comments on MAL that say the manga picks up at this point. I certainly hope it does.





















